Morning sun
Just something i cooked up :
How do you rate the morning sun? After a long and sleepless night, How many stars would you give to the moon? Can you see those stars from where you are? Shine on the lost and loneliest, The ones who can’t get over it. And you always wanted more than life, And now you don’t have the apetite Send a message to the troubadour, The world don’t love you anymore, Tell me how do you rate the morning sun? Stuck inside the rainbow, You could happen to be, ‘cause I’ve been close to where you are! I drove to places you have seen, It all seems so familiar, They’ve been sent to kill you. It doesn’t take an astronaut To float in the spaces just before The morning brings the mystery, The evening makes it history, Who am I to rate the morning sun? And the village drunk, You know he sadly passed away, It was a shame, I never knew his name. I wonder if he sat there in the morning And watched the sunrise. How do you rate the morning sun? It was just a heavy
And all I wanted was the world. And you were the starlet in the sun, Don’t go wasting your time, ‘cause there is no finish line. And you don’t see anything, Not even love, not anything. The night can take the man from you, A sense of wonder overdue. The morning brings the mystery, The evening makes it history, Who am I to rate the morning sun?

Well Yusuf, that's either a rubbish song you copied, or a rubbish scribble you made up, either way...you get the message :D
ReplyDeleteNo really, I liked some parts, but some I couldn't make or tail of what you were saying.
Good luck with poem writing!
*head*
ReplyDeletegood for u
ReplyDeleteit was a randomn thing that popped into my head
LOL.. u little piece of f***,, im havin fun with azooz on my lap. heheeheehe... im gnna kill u, man.
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